Paths that lead to nowhere and everywhere.
A tiger runs down with quiet feet,
my son walks slowly, ponderously.
Be with me, for a moment, part of my world.
Dead stalks slowly become green again,
Dry heat, wet droplets, daffodil perfume,
invite me to travel down the path, no guide.
I fall up through the blue clouds.
I am alone and joined,
to the flowers, the dirt, the air,
yet still and alone my heart breaks free.
Only I wander through these paths,
watching my son, the tiger, my life.
Friday, May 8, 2009
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Let me know what you think. It's not for a project or anything. Thanks:)
Wow. I love the imagery. It's so incredibly melancholy despite all the estethic qualities. One thing: Why a tiger? He doesn't come across as a tiger.
Anne, I love this poem. Really great. Hearbreaking. Lonely. Perfect!
Cute preg-o picture, Amy.
It was a tiger because this was part of an exercise I did in class that suggested using an animal that didn't fit in with the scenery and it really works with my son, metaphorically.
It's not too melancholy, is it? I was trying to go for a more modernist vibe.
You've got too much rhythm for modernism... but that's a good thing. It soaks you in the image, and I love that. I love the relationship within the poem.
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