Your problem is vast
and where is your head?
on the tiny grain cast
by your feet, in your bed
after you took your shoes off,
but not your socks
that tracked sand on the way
from the beach and the rocks.
Monday, May 4, 2009
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My favorite, I also love anything to do with the ocean...but there is so much movement in this one.
I love the flow of this one, to and from the beach like the waves. Nice.
Agreed. But what is interesting to me in that you have a single grain of sand that suddenly becomes a hundred more. So the author focuses on one grain but then it moves unconciously to hundreds of grains. Ah, reminds me on marriage. Sigh.
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