Saturday, November 1, 2008

Whole

I love you.
My young dreams were about you,
full grown and whole.
You had an easy future where
you were
swift and smart, and whole and mine,
and though,
what you have become is so much more,
I mourn
the loss of your innocence
and mine.

4 comments:

anniebanana@hotmail.com said...

Hi Guys,

I know that this poem is probably too sappy for words but I posted it anyway. Forgive my schmaltziness;]

Rachel said...

Definitely not too sappy. It's kind of sad. I love it, the way you love a sad movie.

anniebanana@hotmail.com said...

Thanks Rachel. I'm glad you liked it.

K-Ry said...

I don't find this "schmaltzy." It was simple and impactful. A lot of emotion in just a few words. Definitely from the heart!